feedback from peers on overall work so far

Person 1

Poster

• "She is my girl" is too close to the title and the photo and it would look better if there is more space because it looks too squashed
• The text is too close to the top of the poster
• If I want to ratings think about repositioning the items on the page

Magazine

• Have a more exciting background
• Date, issue number and time are too big - magazines have them smaller
• The white text in the MacBook Air prize is not clear enough
• The colour blue looks out of place and maybe use it more in your magazine

Trailer

• Special effects are not in stereo and only come through in one headphone - camera click
• First bit of onscreen text is too early on ad should be later in the trailer
• go over everything and make sure that whenever you edit the scenes they cut to the beat of the song
• Go some editing so it looks more like a trailer - decrease saturation e.g. give it a film look
• Change the aspect ratio to make it look more like a film
• Make sure all the sound levels are equal

Person 2

Poster

- Its good however the font for the names of the actors need changing
- Change the background and get a better image for the background

Magazine

- Change the font to link with the poster

Trailer

- Colour correct the trailer to make it look more professional
- Distort Josephs voice to make it an unknown voice


From getting feedback from other people I am going to take this on board and make a few tweaks to my work to help meet the needs of my peers, as this feedback is very important.